Thursday, December 22, 2011

TTH project

    I was in my bed happily asleep when i heard a noise near the door. It was pitch black in my room so I couldn't see anything. At first I thought that a mouse was running around but then i saw a light and the door was cracked open. I was hoping that I was dreaming and that I would wake up from this nightmare. But I wasn't having a nightmare, it was all real even though I wish it wasn't. Soon there was more light in the room. I was sweating really bad, shaking everywhere, my heart pounding fast, and my breathing was getting heavy. I was extremely scared and nervous. A little more light was in the room when I realized that the light was coming from a lamp. It opened a little more and that's when I saw a small shadow outside my door. The door opened a little more and the shadow got bigger. I thought I could see a little bit of the persons body but wasn't sure. I started sweating even more and now my heart was racing. I felt like it was going to burst out of my chest at any moment. The door opened a little more and was now opened enough for me to tell who the person was. Its that creepy guy!!! He was always focused on my eye. Why did he care about it so much? Why was he watching me? How long has he been doing this? I was trying to figure it out wen the door swung wide open and the lamp was opened all the way making it really bright in the room. He was heading towards me with an evil grin on his face. When I saw the grin on his face I knew he was about to do something and that I was in trouble. When he got to my bed he roughly grabbed me. I yelled as loud as i could hoping someone would hear me and come help me or call the police. He was dragging me on the floor making my back hurt and put me beside the bed. I tried to get up and run but he held me down. I was using all my strength to break free and escape from him but he was stronger than me. I begged for him to not hurt me but he ignored me. He picked the bed up and put on top of me. Then I was choking and trying to breathe but I couldn't. I was going to die and i knew he wasn't going to get the bed off of me. All I could do was lie there. My heart soon stopped pounding and my eyes were closing. Next thing I know is that im dead and my life was over.

2 comments:

  1. I liked how you told the story from the old man's perspective and how you described the shadow.

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  2. it's a pity that the old man had to die

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